I’m nervous, my mum and me are driving to school to go to camp. We get to school,we bring our stuff to rooms 18 and 19. Me and my BFF Michael go and play on the senior playground with some others and play.Mrs Fearons whistle blows right when we get up there so we had to come down. Mrs Fearon calls the roll then she tells us who’s in which car were going in. I went in a car with Ivan, Olivia and Jessie, with my mum driving. When we got to camp we went to our cabins, I was in a cabin with…
.Me
.Jessica
.Ciara
.Georgia
.Evie
.Faith
My favourite part of camp was the water slide! It was fun to go down on your own because you spun really fast!
My worst part of camp was orienteering. it was really boring to me. It took me a long time to find everything.
On the last day of camp we walked up a big hill.
Renne was the fastest girl to get up so she was queen of the mountain. Kayden and Jerico were the fastest boys so they were king of the mountain.
After that we had rolls for lunch and went home.
Good story Anais - I liked the bit about your favourite activities. My suggestion is that you add a conclusion or summary to your recounts. I will teach you how to do this.
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