Once upon a time there where twins called brooklynn and Quinn. They loved the book about the three billy goats and the monster that tried to eat them. If I ever meet a monster like that I would slay it with a sword said Brooklynn. Yeah but it’s a story so we can’t said Quinn. The boys decided to go to the park. When they got there they found a old bridge. Let’s walk across it said Brooklynn. Okay said Quinn. Brooklynn went first since he was the bravest. When he got across Quinn went. It could break said Quinn and you know I am the smartest so I know.
Well I got across said Brooklynn. So Quinn went, suddenly he got sucked into the water. I will save you said brooklynn. So Brooklynn grabbed a big stick and leaped into the water. He hit the monster until it drowned he then grabbed Quinn and pulled him out. Thanks said Quinn.
No problem said Brooklynn. So they went home and told there parents all about what happened. The end.
Good ideas in the story Anais.
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It's good when kids talk to parents about things going on for them.